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Jan. 9th, 2013 @ 10:17 pm Happy New year!
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From:virxai
Date:January 10th, 2013 03:05 pm (UTC)
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I love this idea! I've a few changes I'd like to propose (changes in bold, deletions have text):

Early Winter
You enter a large clearing in the Alfandrian forest. A thin layer of snow blankets the ground. and the wishing well and the trees are bare of any leaves. The air has a deep chill that frosts the breath of those with warmth inside them. and A cutting wind occasionally kicks up, tossing powdery snow into the air and rattling the leafless branches of the surrounding trees. Above, the sky is crisp and clear. letting The sun shine reachesfrom low in the south through frosty cirrus clouds, a pair of "sun dogs" flanking it. The light sparkles off the icicles clinging to the somber-looking dragon statue, a magical carving at its base, sits coated with icicles that looms near the snow-dusted wishing well.

Late Winter
You enter a large clearing in the Alfandrian forest. Thick snow coveres the ground, crunching on top due to a layer of ice from daytime melt underfoot. The wishing well has a half melted lump on its roof and sits sticking comically out of a drift. Near the well, a large somber-looking dragon statue looms with a magical carving at its base, sits coated with aged icicles still clinging to it. The air has an uneasy cold to it that hints at of warmer days and nights just a few weeks ahead. Above, the sky is partly cloudy with frozen cirrus clouds above decorating the clear blue canvas, one of them shining with rainbow iridescence from the sun.

Early Spring
You enter a large clearing in the Alfandrian forest. Tiny flowers are starting to bloom around the clearing, mainly tulips and several trees in the distance bear pink and white flowering decoration. The wishing well sits damp but finally snowless free of snow or frost in the warm spring sun. Near the well, a large somber-looking dragon statue looms with a magical carving at its base, a little bit of snow in its shadow with a few flowers poking through. The air is cool but comfortable, a light breeze blowing in, carrying with it the smell of awakening vegetation. Above, the sky is mostly clear with a few towering, fluffy clouds in the far distance.

Late Spring
You enter a large clearing in the Alfandrian forest. The trees around have regained their leaves fully and late spring flowers are in full bloom. The wishing well sits nearby, set with a wreath of colorful flowers around its base. Near the well it a large somber-looking dragon statue looms with a magical carving at its base, many flowers at its base surrounding it, planted in memory of those it represents. The air is A warm, and a refreshing wind whispers across the clearing, ruffling the verdant carpet of its grasses. Above, the sky is pocked with cute little fluffy clouds, along with darker ones massed to the north that occasionally emitting a distant peal of thunder.